Am totally with Bronnie on this one. Technical perfection is not always important (thankfully!) and you've really captured something here. A very interesting shot with great b&w.
I like the mood as well...it's not a technically perfect shot but that's what makes it work. It's got this great vintage euro feel to it that you don't see often. I love it, you truly are talented especially when you haven't been shooting film all that long. Great stuff.